Gravity

Good. I'm really happy I didn't offend you. I thought it was a good idea, though.

Where do you see the "but there was none to be had" part? And it's really not an odd thing to say when you think about it. Caterina is basically ...

Oh. I forgot to mention the neighbors!!! There was supposed to be a flashback from John about the neighbors moving in and having a PDA outside while John and his ...

Thank you. I have mediocre feelings about this myself, and I definitely have better stuff. Thanks :)

The guy's name is MIKE not MARK. If you had read the whole story through, you would've seen that the fact the Mike was dead was all just a dream. ...

The thing is, I wrote this poem so that everyone COULD relate to it with their special someone, or in this case, boyfriend. My emotions for this person are...simple. Nothing ...

I know the rhythm is a little off, the first stanza is a sentence. It has a subject and a predicate. I get that it trails off but it is ...

Awww. Well thank you! :)

Thank you. And not every poem rhymes. :)

lol it was all a dream. And they are living together because they were engaged. I mentioned that in Olivia's dream Eulogy

I definitely see your point. I can do a little to change it, but I don't want to mess with it too terribly much. Thanks for your review, I REALLY ...

Thank you so much. I knew the rhythm was a little bit off. But I honestly am just too lazy to change it :p Thanks for telling me it was ...

Thank you! :)

No I didn't, actually. I just kinda came up with this... :/

My Ghost... Well it's very painful to describe. You might benefit by reading my other poem called "The Beast". My Ghost represents the fear inside of me, as well as ...