Gravity

Thanks Iggy, Daniel is confused as to whether or not he liked kissing her, so therefore you should be confuse as well in reality, Daniel feels something for her, he ...

Okay yeah I see where I made that part unclear about the leukemia. I appreciate your suggestions. I see where I did not make it clear but Daniel has basically ...

Thanks. I like your username, it wouldn't be a reference to Lost would it?

I just posted the short, there are two parts

Lol. You'll be happy to know I thought of you. I was on instagram and some guy commented on a photo and said "Titanic sucks" So I commented back "Take ...

Thanks girl, and you're a great writer too! Don't forget that. :D

mmkay

oh and you know repeating things is my weak spot. Is there a specific spot you saw that was to repetative?

thanks Lu, you rock :)

thanks. I feel like such a spaz forgetting all these mistakes. Thank you!

well thank you. Yeah the dialogue is almost complete verbatim of an experience I did have. So about 50% is real. Thank you, and it would be a big help ...

Oh, you might've seen the spam message "I" left earlier. That wasn't me, I got up to use the bathroom and my sister grabbed my computer. So, I'm sorry.

thanks... for kinda liking it? haha

Okay. Yeah you've reviewed my poetry before with similar complaints. So I apologize. This was supposed to be a ballad. Granted, a very dark ballad, but the point of it ...

Thanks. I actually am going to review your review. I used the Universe as a proper noun since the narrator of the poem was actually there. And when I was ...