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Re: The Unsinkable Disaster-Chapter Two
Heya! Gravity here for a review. Let me just say that the Titanic has always fascinated me. I'm already sucked in to this piece, even though it isn't the first ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: The Code of the Wolves
Hiya! Gravity here for a review! Please keep in mind that I am reviewing as I read. So here goes nothing I guess. I read the beginning of Satira's review ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: One Way Out- Chapter Four
Hey, Gravity here for a review! So I've been trying to help clean out the green room, and the main things that need to be reviewed are novel chapters. I ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: the project double zero
Okay. So this is really long, I would suggest shortening it. Also, you have so many grammar errors I can barely understand what you're saying. most of them have been ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: I Could Only Watch
Hey D, I'm going to review this. Sorry I'm only just now getting around to it. I'm going to review this as I read and then tell you what you ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: the sound of snow falling
This almost made me cry. Scratch that, it did make me cry. The only issue I found was when you described the person you love and how handsome they look ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: Between Hell & Heaven
I'm so sorry I didn't get to this until just now. I've been incredibly busy because I'm writing a novel for NaNoWriMo and am already way behind. First, I just ...
Nov 7, 2014 -
Re: Dear Supportive Women,
Tell him. I have a crush on a YWSer and he knows, but we're good friends. 1 of 4 things will happen. 1. He won't like you back and he'll ...
Oct 27, 2014 -
Re: deleted #1
Heya! Gravity here, co captain of the Reviewing Ravens to give you a review! I read your latest chapter, 6.1 and it intrigued me. This was very good but it ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Trying: Chapter 6.1
Heya! Gravity here, co captain of the Reviewing Ravens to give you a review. Sadly, I have not had the opportunity to read more of this exquisite novel. Please also ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 10; Cynthia, Windows
Hello! Gravity here, Captain of the Reviewing Ravens, to give you a review! I unfortunately have not gotten the opportunity to read and review your other chapters, so if anything ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Fainaru Circus -- Chapter Seven
Heya, I'm Gravity, co captain of the Reviewing Ravens on this fine review day! First, I unfortunately have not and probably will not have time to read the rest of ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Between Light and Death
Heya! Gravity here, Co Captain of the Reviewing Ravens to give you a review. This is a SUPER LONG short story. First off, May I suggest splitting it into parts? ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Life Is Like A River
Hey! Gravity here, co captain of The Reviewing Ravens to give you a review! I love the idea behind this poem. I love the theory and the idea, it was ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: An Escape from Asphalt and Engines
Hey! Gravity here for a review. I understand the fear of being in a car crash, I really do. When I say what I'm going to say next, I'm not ...
Oct 17, 2014