Gravity

I love your Haiku. All of them. Especially the one about the buzzing bees. The only criticism I have is that a few of them go off into their own ...

I haven't read any of the pieces before this, so I'm reviewing you based on what I've read. 1. lay off the exclamation marks. It makes the tone of the ...

Now, Matilda had long brown hair, that she usually kept in a bun. She was very popular. Today, as she sorted through boxes of unidentified stuff, she wondered if her ...

I thought this was very good. I really enjoyed your style and descriptions. There are several things missing. In the beginning of a story, you are supposed to introduce the ...

I'm sorry. I couldn't get through this whole short story. Your dialogue is quoted wrong. For example instead of '(dialogue)' It's supposed to be "(dialogue)". When a new character speaks, ...

Hey. This isn't really an essay, it's more of a short story. I love that you are highlighting the finer points of procrastination. Since this isn't an essay, and it ...

I really didn't like this story. I thought it was okay. The grammar errors really screwed me up. When you are using a possessive "there" it is "their". For example ...

I'm going to be very Frank with you, your introduction wasn't good. I'm going to review as I read. World War One (WW1) was the first outbreak of a war ...

I notice that you had a formatting issue. Also, I wanted to point something out. The holographic thing, the mention of the games... This looks like it's going to be ...

I liked this. I thought it was good. The only thing I don't like is how you switch Point of view's so quickly. For an introduction or a prologue, it ...

Okay. I have a lot of things to say about this piece of writing. Most of them good, some of them bad. You had a lot of run on sentences. ...

I don't really have a lot to say. So I guess I should begin by saying this: Everybody who loves to read will encounter a piece of literature, obviously. But ...

I'm probably going to end up offending you. However, I owe this to you as a fellow writer. I'm going to be extremely harsh. If you don't handle criticism well, ...

I like this poem. I think it's sweet, and light and the idea behind it is extremely romantic. There are a few things I don't like. Don't take this personally, ...

I really like this poem. I love the idea behind it. It seems like you're just saying that only time will tell what will happen in the future, and that ...