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Re: Golden Wattle Trees
Hey Nicole! Gravity here to review your poem on this lovely review day! I am reviewing on a brand new computer with an unfamiliar keyboard, so I apologize in advance ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: The True Windows to the Soul
Hey niteowl, Gravity here for a review on this lovely review day! I am on a brand new computer with a brand new keyboard, so please excuse any typos :) ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: A Box of Shattered Glass
Hey there, Gravity here for a review! Okay, so, this was a deep piece of prose because you are covering topics that are, sadly, becoming more and more relevant: drugs ...
Jul 12, 2016 -
Re: Two?
Hey, Gravity here for a review :) Okay, so let me begin by saying I love, love, LOVE this concept. This is the kind of thing that makes me think ...
May 26, 2016 -
Re: A help.. PLSSSS
Heya, Gravity here for a review! So, the thing about Haiku (yes, there is no s in the plural form, those tricky Japanese :)) is that they can be very ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: irl
Hey there! Grav here for a review! So I decided to review this because I can definitely relate to this. Online friendships and relationships can certainly seem very real or ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: The Hippie Strikes Again
Hey Strange! So I decided to review this mostly because I see you everywhere on YWS and I've had the privilege of reading your other poems over the past couple ...
May 5, 2016 -
Re: What does it mean to be a female?
Heya! Gravity here for a review, So I can really relate to a lot of the points here because I'm a feminist and I'm pansexual, so I'm all for gay ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Prismatic Spring
Heya! Gravity here for a short review So there's not a whole lot to review here but I would hate to see this stay in the greenroom forever. One thing ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Passé
Hiya, Gravity here for a review! This is going to be very quick, as this was really a great read. I love the vocab, love the descriptions and I love ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: 'She' By Shenita Etwaroo
Hiya! Gravity here to do a review! Let me just say right off the bat that I absolutely love the power and the concept of this poem. I feel like ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: "It's Just Hormones"
Hey there! Gravity here for a review. It's almost funny how similar our situations are. I'm a pansexual female with Christian parents and I'm questioning my faith. I have a ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: Mezzo Forte
Hey there! Gravity here for a review. So, first of all I wanted to start by asking you a question. When writing a piece you generally want to determine whether ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.06)
Heya! Gravity here for a review :) So here's how this is going to work. I'm just going to review as I go along (so it will be mostly negative ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Ascent Chapter 3
Heya! Gravity here for a review So I'm not sure what this book is about but so far I've found lots of humor and though you talk about designs... Eric ...
Nov 29, 2015
