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  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Diary of a Homeless Person

    This was quirky. When I read this I was listening to "Count On Me" by Bruno Mars so I really got the feel of the relationship between the man and ...

    Aug 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Small-town twilight

    Okay. Well I need to start my review at your title. It should all be capitalized. Small-Town Twilight. Every word in your title should be capitalized unless it's a pronoun ...

    Aug 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1

    Hey Kelly! So I got my computer back and I decided to read over this and give you a review. The first thing I would like to say is that ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One *Revised*

    Wow. Omg. Wow. I can't even. I'm not a fan girl, I never say "I can't even" but seriously I CANT FREAKING EVEN But I can odd :) Anyway. I ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Satire, General Re: .

    SportyWriter was great. I interviewed him for a Squills article. I'm sorry to hear he quit. I wasn't a fan of this/ I didn't think it was very funny. But ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: More Than A Dream

    I really don't want to be negative. I just thought this was really cliche. I've seen a million stories like this one with different character names. It also just doesn't ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Descend into Insanity

    Hello! I saw that you categorized this piece as horror. I'm a big fan of writing horror so I decided to give this a review. I thought you did amazing ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Bloodbath

    I couldn't find much wrong with this, honestly. I loved your character, this piece is funny and your character is so sarcastic. Even when your MC knows they are probably ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Soul Searcher- Chapter 02: Link is (not) human

    Hello! Co captain of team yellow here for a review. This is my first review of the review day as I have been busy so I might be just a ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • » Re: Life After him - prologue

    Okay so I was intrigues by this when I saw chapter 2 in the greenroom. I decided to check out your portfolio and look at chapter 1, and then I ...

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Confines V

    I haven't read the previous chapters, but I really like this one and I've gotten the gist of what's going on. You had some minor grammar errors at the beginning. ...

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Lyrics » Humor, Fanfiction Re: "Let it Load"

    I really liked this parody, I am always asking questions so I completely understand where you're coming fro! When you talk about the wait for search engines. I also really ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Pathetic

    This was amaze-balls, I loved it! I wish that there had been more characterization in that I wish I had gotten a visual of your character, ad I don't recall ...

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Blood Bath-- The Only One

    Hello fellow tribute! Gravity here to give you a review. So this was great. I loves your tone throughout the whole thing. I was confused about who MaryAnna is. I'm ...

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: There's a narcissist in the mirror

    This was great. I literally have nothing to review so how's about I just say a bunch of nice things? I liked the ending. It was refreshing because for once ...

    Jun 11, 2014


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