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Re: Diary of a Homeless Person
This was quirky. When I read this I was listening to "Count On Me" by Bruno Mars so I really got the feel of the relationship between the man and ...
Aug 21, 2014 -
Re: Small-town twilight
Okay. Well I need to start my review at your title. It should all be capitalized. Small-Town Twilight. Every word in your title should be capitalized unless it's a pronoun ...
Aug 21, 2014 -
Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1
Hey Kelly! So I got my computer back and I decided to read over this and give you a review. The first thing I would like to say is that ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One *Revised*
Wow. Omg. Wow. I can't even. I'm not a fan girl, I never say "I can't even" but seriously I CANT FREAKING EVEN But I can odd :) Anyway. I ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: .
SportyWriter was great. I interviewed him for a Squills article. I'm sorry to hear he quit. I wasn't a fan of this/ I didn't think it was very funny. But ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: More Than A Dream
I really don't want to be negative. I just thought this was really cliche. I've seen a million stories like this one with different character names. It also just doesn't ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Descend into Insanity
Hello! I saw that you categorized this piece as horror. I'm a big fan of writing horror so I decided to give this a review. I thought you did amazing ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Bloodbath
I couldn't find much wrong with this, honestly. I loved your character, this piece is funny and your character is so sarcastic. Even when your MC knows they are probably ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Soul Searcher- Chapter 02: Link is (not) human
Hello! Co captain of team yellow here for a review. This is my first review of the review day as I have been busy so I might be just a ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Life After him - prologue
Okay so I was intrigues by this when I saw chapter 2 in the greenroom. I decided to check out your portfolio and look at chapter 1, and then I ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: Confines V
I haven't read the previous chapters, but I really like this one and I've gotten the gist of what's going on. You had some minor grammar errors at the beginning. ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: "Let it Load"
I really liked this parody, I am always asking questions so I completely understand where you're coming fro! When you talk about the wait for search engines. I also really ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Pathetic
This was amaze-balls, I loved it! I wish that there had been more characterization in that I wish I had gotten a visual of your character, ad I don't recall ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: The Blood Bath-- The Only One
Hello fellow tribute! Gravity here to give you a review. So this was great. I loves your tone throughout the whole thing. I was confused about who MaryAnna is. I'm ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: There's a narcissist in the mirror
This was great. I literally have nothing to review so how's about I just say a bunch of nice things? I liked the ending. It was refreshing because for once ...
Jun 11, 2014
