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Re: mothman
First, let me say thank you for posting up your writing. It's been a while since I've been on the site and your story is the first I've read. I ...
Dec 31, 2025 -
Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 3
I'm pretty sure you've heard it before but you need more description. I can't say that I am the best at putting describing things in my own stories(either I put ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Libertine Sighs
I've got to admit your use of vocabulary greatly impressed me. Such a great and short story should have a lot more reviews than just two, but eh, what can ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Waiting
I'm not going to lie. When I read this poem it reminded me of the way how me and my ex-girlfriend acted to each other. She had a lot of ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: What We Have Become
I am truly awestruck by this. I'm glad I'm not the only one has ever thought this before. I do believe that the world has become lazy as some of ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter One [Revised]
Okay, here's my second review for today. Nice too meet you and first off great story. I'm loving it so far. I'm not the best at reviewing but I'll do ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: She's Just a pawn
This was compelling to read. I'm not much a review person but I guess I can just tell you what I like about it and what I don't. Good 1. ...
Aug 11, 2014
