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GrHinds09

GrHinds09

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: iworry

    This is beautiful and sad at the same time. I really connected with this and I think I know how the narrator feels. All that bottled up anxiety and pain ...

    Oct 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: everythingwasbeautiful&nothinghurt

    This poem describes love and knowing someone so deeply and truly in your own soul in such a lovely way. It seems like the narrator really loves this person and ...

    Oct 18, 2023
  • Short Story » Narrative, Romantic Re: First Snowfall

    This sounds like the perfect hallmark winter romance. Like your descriptions are so vivid that I could almost imagine myself in this world. It reminds me of Stars Hollow around ...

    Oct 18, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Villainess

    This is really lovely for how short it is. It packs so much emotion into just a few sentences. I love the ending. I feel like the people who hurt ...

    Oct 18, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Snooze Button

    I enjoyed the build of suspense as you find out that he got left behind and that where ever he is is going to get hit. The last line hit ...

    Oct 18, 2023


The thing about plummeting downhill at fifty miles an hour on a snack platter - if you realize it's a bad idea when you're halfway down, it's too late.
— Rick Riordan, The Son of Neptune