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What type of assignment? I love this poem! It's very heart-touching. It made me tear up a bit

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I'll add another creatures. I can mix it up a bit, and not just pull creatures from DW. I can maybe tie in a villain or two from Marvel or ...

haahha! Thanks TrudiRose!! That is how I originally planned it actually, with not much of a plot, characters, etc. My friends has been bugging me to put all my "Stories" ...

Yep, I love DW :3 Thanks Clarity! I will get right on it. Do you have any specific ideas? I wrote this as a short story/cliffhanger type thing for some ...

Yes! Thanks for the review! I will get right on the suggestions. This story was actually all in the same font and such in the Word doc I had it ...

You are very welcome ^~^ I'm following to you :)) Read it again. It makes my heart melt.

That is amazing! You have a lucky sister. Both of them touched my heart.

Thanks for the review Lost ^_^

I love story cliffhangers stories!!! What was the light though?!? I must know! What were you envisioning as the light? I was thinking a UFO or something. THIS IS VERY ...

I personally like "my pace is the doubled"

Alright, thanks! I wasn't sure how to end it. I like your suggestion of ending it at "Who knows, what is loved today may be gone tomorrow." Thanks again for ...

I liked the poem. Like the other comments said, the rhyming was little forced in a few areas. But I can feel the emotion behind it which I love. Keep ...