GoldFlame

Wow, that got a bit longer than I expected....Battle looking great!

Thanks! I see what you mean about the formatting looking a bit awkward...will fix pronto :D.

Thanks! I'm off to review something of yours in retaliation :D.

Thanks! Will take that into account.

Thanks! I was hoping that Gallifrey didn't seem too thrown in there.

Thanks!

Um, I meant to say "nitpick," not "points."

Looks great!

I take that back; that was very well-done :). I guess I was aiming more for the part before that, though, when the armies were assembling. I'd also recommend elaborating ...

No problem! Will take a look :D.

Amazing :D. Although I think that you need more than three drops of thoughtfulness, a pinch of love, and a bit of Bad Situation zest.

Right back at you ;).

Yes, better :).

This was honestly one of the best reviews I've ever received. You really zoned in on the parts I felt insecure about--the development of the characters and exposition. I edited ...

Thanks for listening! Really, it was no problem :).