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Re: Guardianship Ch.1: The Girl Who Held Darkness
No problem! And it's perfectly fine, using "his" instead of "its." My only concern is that you stay consistent. I definitely enjoyed this, though, and the reply was worth the ...
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: The Midnight Meeting
No problem! I enjoyed reading it.
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: Voiceless
No problem! This was a great work!
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: Princesses Anonymous
No problem! :D
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: Trulium
Happens to me all the time, too :).
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: The Monsters in the Closet
No problem! Unfortunately, a semicolon would be grammatically incorrect. They're only used for lengthy lists and joining independent clauses.
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?
Review on Trulium completed!
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?
Nevermind. Completed!
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?
Thanks :D! I've made it a goal to review everyone who reviews me, so...what do you want me to review in turn?
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?
I've made it a goal to review everyone that reviews me. Tell me what work...?
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?
Thanks!
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: The Field Of Time
Yes, definitely helps :D. In my review, I only suggested that you replace "dirt." "Clay" sounds great; keep it! And no, not too much headed in that direction!
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 4
Not that there is anything to be confused about!
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 4
I guess that the message just got a bit muddled there...I was confused as to why I'm interested in a piece of historical fiction. Because I usually never am :D. ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 4
And you an awesome writer. I truly enjoy reading about the Battle of Marathon. How??? :P No problem, by the way.
Jan 21, 2014
