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GoldFlame

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Guardianship Ch.1: The Girl Who Held Darkness

    No problem! And it's perfectly fine, using "his" instead of "its." My only concern is that you stay consistent. I definitely enjoyed this, though, and the reply was worth the ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Midnight Meeting

    No problem! I enjoyed reading it.

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Voiceless

    No problem! This was a great work!

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Princesses Anonymous

    No problem! :D

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Trulium

    Happens to me all the time, too :).

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Monsters in the Closet

    No problem! Unfortunately, a semicolon would be grammatically incorrect. They're only used for lengthy lists and joining independent clauses.

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?

    Review on Trulium completed!

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?

    Nevermind. Completed!

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?

    Thanks :D! I've made it a goal to review everyone who reviews me, so...what do you want me to review in turn?

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?

    I've made it a goal to review everyone that reviews me. Tell me what work...?

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?

    Thanks!

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Field Of Time

    Yes, definitely helps :D. In my review, I only suggested that you replace "dirt." "Clay" sounds great; keep it! And no, not too much headed in that direction!

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 4

    Not that there is anything to be confused about!

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 4

    I guess that the message just got a bit muddled there...I was confused as to why I'm interested in a piece of historical fiction. Because I usually never am :D. ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 4

    And you an awesome writer. I truly enjoy reading about the Battle of Marathon. How??? :P No problem, by the way.

    Jan 21, 2014


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