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Will try to squeeze in a review before piano lessons...can't let this epic novel stay in the green room... I just finished rereading that description of their location, and I ...

There must be something wrong with my computer. It says "1 comment (2 reviews)." Anyway, Flame here! Eleventy-first review! You never cease to amaze-- This is awkward. I already wrote ...

Flame here! Revisiting the past is a clever way to explain the present. As I was reading this, I wanted to scream, "Don't accept the offer! Don't betray Durriken! He's ...

Back to the Future! (Pun intended) Am I correct in assuming that you can read the future? Because I swear, every one of my previous nitpicks has been resolved :D. ...

Flame here! That was a heartstring-tugger. Often have I reflected on how awful it'd be to lose a family member...much less your own child. But there was some sweetness laced ...

...Pope Alexander’s daughter Lucrezia’s passing... O_O Onto the review! Amazing work, as always. The pieces of the plot are starting to fit together. And I don't know how you've sculpted ...

Still can't believe that his name's pronounced "fran-swah." I should've expected it, but still...that voiceless velar stop contributed to the solidification of his personality. Apologies in advance fo

This is officially the longest I've ever stuck with a novel. :D Did I already say that your writing is addicting? I can see the characters being fleshed out. The ...

Back again! Here you definitely seized my attention. Not just with the action, but the fact that the entire piece was a splendid fusion of action and dialogue and narration. ...

So sorry I couldn't review sooner! What with sleep deprivation and homework and all... Oh, you beat me. Submitted another chapter. I really need to catch up. It's difficult not ...

Back again! Big fan of your style. :D For your first go at haikus, this was superb. The poem would function just as well without the five-seven-five pattern—although the pattern ...

Flame here! 101st review! It's snowing here in central NJ, so I've spent the day digging around YWS... When I saw this title, I was expecting something similar to You ...

The quietest people have the loudest minds. Your poem reminded me of this quote, and also of Momo , a children's novella my G&T teacher recommended. I remember my best ...

Okay, to review this without bursting into tears... It was very well-written. I've never imagined George to think so poetically, but the figurative language really tied everything together. It didn't ...

Flame here, as promised! I agree that this is your best chapter. You monitored your use of repetition, and my eyes were glued to the screen. The messenger's run also ...