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Oh, I hate trying to locate mistakes in this beautiful piece. It weakens the suspense, and it feels like such a...crime. Like when they assign you a novel in LA ...

I'm the only one reviewing this? Come on, YWSers! Alright, since I wrote that I anticipated this like the third season of BBC Sherlock, I'll write that I read this ...

I realized, I've been awaiting these chapters as eagerly as the third season of Sherlock. And I gasped at the end like I did at the Empty Hearse episode. You ...

Heads up, this review is going to be a little jumbled, in terms of praise and nitpicks. So, I have to disagree with the previous reviewers. The exposition's taking form, ...

Flame here! I'm assuming this was for the Olympics? Amazing. You can pull off any bizarre topic. So, no technical errors, except for this one slip-up in the beginning: ...makes ...

I just popped onto YWS, and seeing that you'd submitted this 29 seconds ago, immediately clicked on it. You're taking a YWS break? We'll all miss you :(. I suppose, ...

Back again! I've officially decided; this is my favorite chapter. I love witnessing change in characters. The Belgariad , Delirium --I just absorb that kind of thing like a sponge. ...

Flame here, as promised! First off, I love your title. It bounced from an idiom, but it's absolutely unique :D. Okay, I'll admit, I've been guilty of sugarcoating things. Some ...

Flame here, as promised! Happy Valentine's! I'll admit, it's strange answering a request for an experienced poet I requested a review from recently, but I'll take a stab at it. ...

Flame here, as promised! I'm in...awe. Death's developed into a common theme, but everyone has their own take on it. Yours, especially, was amazing. When my eyes skated over the ...

Sorry if it seems like I'm stalking you. Your poetry's just so amazing... I don't know what to say that others haven't already said. Breathtaking imagery, the line breaks suit ...

Back again! Happy Valentine's Day :P! It's usually my policy to stick with a novel after Chapter Five, but with Vampiric, I'm reviewing of my own free will. You just ...

Welcome to YWS! It's a guarantee you'll enjoy yourself here :D. This's dwelt in the Green Room a while, so I thought I'd poke around. Absolutely loved it. Perfect fusion ...

Welcome to YWS! Any questions, just send me call ;). You write extremely well for your age. I can't recall much of what I wrote when I was eleven, but ...

Yes! First to review, unless someone sneaks in a submission while I'm typing :D... He was the one piece of the puzzle that just didn’t fit, the one I had ...