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sounds more like song than a poem, but sometimes theres no difference. kinda like Don Mclean's "Vincent" (i.e. it sounds like a poem, but its a song) the subject is ...

very original idea, i like the way you wrote about [Fire?] as a living thing. but can i ask why you refer to it as feminine?

im not gonna say much, but i found this poem boring, a good idea, and its flow is terrible, but it is too damn long, i got bored about four ...

im not gonna say much, but i found this poem boring, a good idea, and its flow is terrible, but it is too damn long, i got bored about four ...

damn. thats irony for you. this story is great matierial. i disagree with whoever is is that comments above me, they are too picky...(nothing personal) there were a few cosmetic ...

this is his first story? thats pretty good for a first, hmmm... well, its too short, and it lacks descripive or figurative language, what he's got it an outline for ...

Nice poem, For dreams all though we are, and not for thou to be alone. we are all alike. at yet, we are all unique. it is an anomaly. keep ...

i like the idea, it presents an interesting question... not sure what though. but it needs more poetry to it, instead of just reciting... i dont know, im probably wrong, ...

Awesome, but i agree with them... absolutely. not a thing i would change.

i like the way you captured the essence of the aging of the tree, from seed to sapling to tree, to a dead log. very good.

ditto. it was boring... i dont know... too cliche. (so are everyones poems though) eh, it gives me a couple ideas thogh... nive try.

good point, yes... but it was a spur of the moment poem, (i know i sound like im making excuses for it.) and i disagree about your "middle school english" ...

thanks all, as a comment though, this is NOT my first poem, nor my first one ive posted, ive also posted 2 or 3 others, as well as a short ...

I agree with KJ, burning the house down is a little excessive for the situation... unless she i paranoid... or schizophrenic... or just plain nuttier than a can o' Planters. ...

just to clear things up, this poem is saying that no matter how hard we try, sometimes fate has decided to ignore our wishes and dreams, but you should never ...