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Loved the poem, Viva La Revolucion! but, Vain, and Crayon, while they do not match are pretty darn close, close enough, to me. on the other hand, i did not ...

decent poem, was absolutely not true, (no offense) but i think you need to come out of your little box and take a look at the world around you. that ...

i dont like the people like... that one who mad the comments about the cliches and apostraphes, I MEAN GET A LIFE... AND YOU READ SOME! WRITING IS NOT ABOUT ...

holy dang. I GOT FIRST REPLY!!! W00T anyhows. it was interesting. and decently written, but Im wondering, have you read the book, Twilight ? too many similarities between the two. ...

good story, but YOU NEED TO SPACE YOUR PARAGRAPHS. its confusing if you dont, and like the other person said, there are some issues with it. like the family. idk... ...

i agree with the other person, plop doesnt seem right, maybe try "splat" or something else... nice poem... well, not nice, but interesting... i may or may not actually know ...

i think it needs to be condensed a little, its just too long saying the same things over again. granted i amy not be the best jusge of things, but ...

awesome poem, it was personal, and yet, not sappy. i cant think of anything wrong thats not already been taken care of (sorry) what a waste of a review. now ...

well for one thing.(this is an aswer to the above comment) it wasnt a chapter, was it? No. it was a prologue. anyhows. it was interesting enough, a little cliche ...

Well, this is the first pirate story I've read in a while... i wonder, have you read Robert Louis Stevenson's Treasure Island ? it reminds of such, we all need ...

The contrast of cultural and geographical boundaries is obvious when put like this. I liked the poem, yet somehow, it seems as if it isn't entirely what it seems. great ...