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I am going to find it very hard to give you a good review, because while this poem was good, it spoke to me in such a way that I ...

I enjoyed this poem because it has style. The poem has a personal style that is not evident in most people's writing this is a bit confusing, but it definately ...

I like this poem because it has a very tribal dance feel to it, and it is about the fire, maybe the fire in someones heart, maybe a more literal ...

I enjoyed your poem, it had a nice flow, rhyme sceme, and it was extremely humorous You seem like the kind of person that is able to just spit something ...

ha ha, I loved this poem, a couple mechanical errors, but i'll let others correct them. it was good, you could easilty tell, i think the point you were trying ...

I liked, it. and I agree, most definatley with the fist critiquer(?) as I have not yet viewed teh other. It was well written, well presented, and dealt with issues ...

Well, those malicious people (I am NOT talking about anyone in particular) go... and... well, lets not go there. It was a great poem, a bit long for my taste, ...

So, I have read thy poem, and then read the comments. It was a very powerfully moving poem, and Mr. Gandhi was one of the most amazing people I have ...

That was beautiful, and I am 100% serious. Such raw emotion, it takes someone a lot of feeling to write something like that down. My hat's off to you, even ...

nice poem, it builds, Im not sure form where, or to where, but its good, I like the way the poem progressed, but if there is anything wrong with it, ...

hmmm... sounds like she's got a telepathy complex, i recommend a dosage of strong hallucinogens, preferably taken with a strong alcohol, that should take care of it, ha ha... but ...

ha ha, I liked this, it was amusing... it kinda reminded me of a story a friend wrote... about chickens... anyways, the flow was realistic, and the characters believable. I ...

Great poem about freedom, and being unafraid of the next step, at the same time, wanting someone to take the plunge with you. if i read this poem (which I ...

Viva La Revolucion! this is a very angry poem, or at lest, its passionate. and i have to agree, the last stanza is probably the best, youre saying, "If this ...

Im not sure what to put here, it was a good poem, and i liked the way you presented it, kind of like... broken, yet whole and fluid. The idea ...