Gnomish

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Thanks for the review! I agree it could have been a bit more detailed but I wanted to keep it kind of simple because when I wrote it I aimed ...

Thanks! I'll try to find an alternative for that section!

I agree I got a little tangled up with the tenses. Thanks for the awesome review!

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story! I'm not really sure how I came up with the idea, probably just from watching dragonflies and wondering about the name.

No problem, glad it helped!

Okay, good to know! Post the next chapter soon please!

Oh No! Bad idea! There is no way this can end well! I really like the writing in this chapter, and Summer's conversation with Micah seemed really realistic and organic. ...

Thanks, this helped a lot!

Thanks for this review! I have learnt about the punctuation thing, I'm just really bad at it and your explanation really helped!

Thanks again for this review! I'll try to get more action into the next chapter, I'm just a bit scared of rushing it!

I just wanted to let you know that I have actually got rid of the Mary Parson scene in my other drafts thanks to your advice. I think the story ...

Thanks for your review! I definitely agree with you and I'll try to add more descriptions!