Gnomish

Okay! I have read many retellings of the legend of Medusa, and I have always felt that Athena had wrongly cursed Medusa. Although in the original it is said that ...

All right. First of all, I really liked the atmosphere in this story as well as the way you wrote it. It was kind of cloaked with mystery, but you ...

Aha! Captain hook? Once again, I did find the beginning funny. The ending was a bit disturbing, but it was well written and descriptive. However, I'm not quite sure what ...

OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!!! I love the ending! First of all, I've always felt bad for the stag, so I'm glad it's in Asphodel. Second of all, I see ...

Is this the end? I hope not, but it's a good ending. A few nits... "I can’t find it myself to care that my trial is going to be a ...

Another excellent chapter (of course)! First things first, I love the description in this paragraph. "He’s dressed in full armor. The suit looks like it could take several blows from ...

Great chapter! I don't mean to be offensive, but I haven't really liked Persephone as a character so far (our personalities just clash I guess), but I really like that ...

Great chapter! Your descriptions were excellent, and the suspense made me think that something would go wrong at any time. I can't wait to read the next chapter so that ...

Not much to say... In the beginning of the chapter Karlos was referred to as kind, but in this sentence he seemed as unwelcoming as "the girl". "In curt tone, ...

Sorry it's been a while since I wrote a review... I don't have much to say for this chapter. I like the descriptions you use when describing the doors in ...

I think this one was my favourite so far... I liked that the Evil Queen narrated most of the story, and that more characters were added. (Stepmother and brother.) I ...

A couple things to say... First of all, "She's just a divorced mother now who works in a library now." You don't need to say the "now" after "mother", because ...

Nice! Very funny! I liked the plot twist, and of the course the evil queen made things more humorous. I didn't actually get the owl being the magic mirror thing ...

Awesome! I liked how you explained things that he did in a humorous way. For example, "I tilt my head (more for effect, because I can think without tilting my ...

Great job! Throughout the story Taleweaver was referred to as "they", I'm assuming because he doesn't have a gender. However, in some parts of the story it's a bit strange, ...