Gnomish

Hey there! I just read through the other chapters, so I'll try to write an educated review! First of all, the story seems really interesting, and I'm curious to read ...

Hello again! Awww... I'm a sucker for a cute apology, and it was nice to get the soldier's name and a couple backstories. Someone probably already mentioned this, but I ...

Hey there! A couple things to mention. "Wind whistled, over the stars muted by clouds blue in the darkening twilight" Just a grammar note, but I don't think there should ...

Hello! I don't really have much to say about this, I like the descriptive words and phrases you used though. For this line, "Abusers of the hero's," I think you ...

I know my points aren't really changing from review to review, but I really love the character development here. I'm a bit confused why she wants to meat the chieftess ...

Hey there! I'm really liking the idea of this story so far! First of all, I love the title! Secondly, I really like how you used the metaphor of the ...

Hey there! I'm a sucker for a fantasy story, so I clicked on this right away. First of all, I really liked how you managed to introduce the setting and ...

Hey there! I really like the idea of this scene! I think it's clever that you added "This is easy" throughout the scene. "Oh, the prince was beautiful, not much ...

Hello, I'm here again, as I'd said! So I'm again a little confused about the something again. Near the end of the chapter after Jaan lied Ciel down it was ...

Hey, I'm here for a review! I know I'm a little late coming into this, but I saw the seventh chapter and I wanted to start at the beginning. Anyways, ...

Hey! So I know I have hardly been reviewing at all, so I'll try to write a decent one this time because it's the last chapter. Can I just say ...

Hey! So after reading this chapter I'm a bit confused and I really want to read the next chapter! The dynamics between the characters are great, and i'm really getting ...

Whoa, what? I thought Isodora and Cassius were going to be a couple, and Mishal was jealous, but is she with someone named Ashael? And is Cassius her brother, because ...

Hey! So first of all, the opening line. I love it! It sets the stage nicely without being to revealing, and, of course, makes you want to read more. So ...

Hello! I'd like to start by saying that the script itself is very detailed, almost half like a novel. I'm not sure if that's what most scripts are like, but ...