Gnomish

Hello, I'm sorry it's been a while, I'll try and catch up over the next couple days. "You too need to stop fighting." A little typo here, you said too ...

Hello again! I know I'm a little late to the party but I was feeling unmotivated so there we are. The scene was wondrous. In the last sentence/paragraph you used ...

Hello! I'm afraid I don't have much of a review for you here. “My apologies.” he replied soothingly, but it made the couple’s spine tingle. Made the couple's spine s ...

Hey there! Let's jump straight into the review! I really like the excellent imagery going on in the first couple paragraphs. It introduces the setting and sets the scene without ...

Hello again! Thanks for tagging me! I like the direction this story is going, especially with Audrey seeing Akolxohez in her dream, but I'm a little confused about the first ...

Hello! I'll do my best to review this, sorry that a lot of these are just little things. "He had just given an interview and he wasn’t having very high ...

Hello! I really like this story. It reminds me a bit of Jane Austen's novels, although I suppose it takes place around the same time. I really like the dynamic ...

Hello! Some little things I noticed... "She sighed and I laughed as she revelled in the smooth touch." I'm not sure what this line contributes to the story. I think ...

Ooooh! How exciting, more Summoning Persephone! I really am liking this new version, and I'll try to answer your questions. 1. "Is the character's voice strong enough? Is it believable, ...

Hey! Okay, so this I'm really interested in where this story is going! A couple little things I noticed... "looking ancy as he glanced at me nervously from time to ...

Hello again! I've read a couple of your stories so far and I really like the humour in them, and I guess I should actually write a review! So here ...

Hey there! I really liked this story and didn't see many problems other than a typo. "Ha! I laugh at the notion os space." I think you mean of not ...

Hello! First off, a little typo here. "Camera's flashed..." If you mean more than one camera, it's written cameras. "David Groves, minister for agriculture, let out a small sob. “Not ...

Hey there! I really like the idea of this story! I think the names of everyone are super fitting to their race, and the prejudices that go along with them. ...

Hello! Some Greek mythology thrown into here with a contemporary story? Anyways, let's get into it! The first time Eurydice appears I was a little confused. I I thought she ...