Gnomish

Okay, this is very heavy (Which I knew from the title) and I'm not quite sure how to approach this, so I apologize in advance if it is insensitive in ...

Hi there! I love fairy tale retells, so I was very excited to read this! A few grammar things I noticed... In the meantime, the Consort had also begun to ...

Hello again! I'm excited for this next chapter where we get to see what happens in the arena! There were two ledges on either side of Riptide's. Raygal stood on. ...

Happy review day! Some little typos first... "It is up to you, what you want to do next Grimbell. I would put a comma before Grimbell, I find that reads ...

Hello! This is an interesting chapter, especially with the ali corn and whatever happened between Zoya and Obraya. I'm just going to take a guess here and say that Will's ...

Hello! I find this story really interesting, with the idea of post-apocalyptic world, especially in these times. The ending is sad, but I think it's a good way to end ...

Alright, so I'm not sure whether this chapter is supposed to be funny, but there are a few lines that made me chuckle. King Akolxohez was sitting in his room, ...

Hello! I don't think I reviewed chapter 12 but I am still reading! (Also I'm very impressed with your consistency posting, I haven't posted the next chapter of Soul Cutters ...

Hello again! So, I'll try to give this a decent review, but I'm still a little lost. Raddig is Erson's boyfriend, who Erson is almost giving everything up for, and ...

Hello! So I'm kind of just jumping in the middle here so I'll do my best. First of all, I think Buck/Buttane is friends with Erson and Myal, who are ...

What excitement! Is Askel Askel's real name or is it a nickname too? And if it is a nickname, what's his long name? Akol and Askel are so human-like. I ...

Hello! Zoya's quite a likeable character, eh? Makes you appreciate Ujalaa's kindness. I loved the little stand off between Will and Akol (poor Will doesn't stand a chance!), and it ...

Hello, I'm finally reviewing this chapter! It looked as if everything but the Devils and slaves - they were all kids who looked around the age of Ujalaa - who ...

Hello! I like this poem, I think it teaches a good subtle lesson, and I especially like the last two lines. The rhyming I'm assuming goes ABCB, but the fifth ...

Hello! I've read the first chapter, and I'm really interested in where this is going. I like how Charlotte kind of accepts she's in a story, and aknowladges the clichés ...