Glimmerglass

Hey, Glim here to review! I'm so excited. ^.^ So first off, I really adore your title. So far it fits in perfectly with the piece and makes me hugely ...

Hey, there! Glim here to review! Gah, I just...totally and completely LOVED this. It's sweet and confused and has a great, original voice and is just perfect. I could totally ...

Hey, there! Glim here to review! So, you have a great poem here! It's quite short, but you wrap up your thoughts nicely in two quatrains, so kudos for that. ...

Hey, there! Glim here to review! Eeep! There are so many things that I love about this poem! It's hard to critique this, because it's a very solid poem, but ...

Hey, there! Here to review! So I have mixed feelings about this poem: on one hand, the overall impression I got from this poem was very powerful and tangible. The ...

Hey, there! Glim here to review! So, I liked your essay because it addresses a very real issue in our world today. Also, I love statistics because they help my ...

Hey, there, I really enjoyed your poem, mainly because, as Nixie put it, you brought a new and original perspective to an admittedly common topic. However, your metaphor was interesting ...

Hey, there! I liked your poem for a number of reasons: 1) It's simple and easy to read, which helps get your meaning across, 2) It's heartfelt and potent, with ...

Hey, sleepthief! So first off, what I really enjoyed about your poem was the overall impression it gave me; I could feel the narrator's emotions so clearly that they were, ...

Hey, there, Glim here to review. First off, I thought your poem was very powerful and well-written. I think the desire to fit female stereotypes is so prevalent in teens ...

Hi! Here to review. So far, I really like this story. It's interesting and engaging and tells the me just enough to interest me without overloading the information. This is ...

If Edward had killed Bella at the beginning of the series like this, then I wouldn't have had to endure the rest of the book! If this is a parody, ...

Hi, there! Here to review. First, I'm not actually sure if there's a first part to this, so I'm just going to review it as it is. :) I really ...

Hi, there! Welcome to the site! Interesting poem; I agree with Sporks that it's kind of hard to criticize this, exactly. The language has kind of a joyful swoop to ...

Hi, Born! I liked this piece very much; more, I think, than the first part because I now have some back story. Lidia is fleshed out, and her character is ...