Glauke

Wow, thank you so much!! :)

Thanks very much for your lovely feedback! :)

Sure thing! Thank you :)

Thank you for your feedback :)

Thanks very much! :)

Thanks so much for your feedback!! So detailed and helpful :)

Thank you for your kind words! :)

Thanks for your feedback! I've actually been playing around with line breaks, etc. quite a bit lately - if you'd like to, you can check out this poem I wrote ...

Thank you!! :)

Thanks so much! :)

Dang!! This is so cool!

Thanks for your feedback!! I appreciate it. The flow is one thing I'm working on -- there are a few moments I really want to emphasize and go into detail ...

Thanks! That was actually the intention -- this is the a preface to another story. It was intended to do a bit of world creation and introduce a backstory. Thanks ...

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Thanks for your feedback and helpful tips :-) I appreciate it!