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Nice! This looks good, but it's really long. Maybe I'm ADD, I don't know, but I sort of got a little bored around the fifth stanza. From what I did ...

Good job, Dogs! This is a great poem! Keep it up! I'm excited to read more from you. It would be nice, as stated above I'm sure, if there was ...

Thanks everyone! And Jellybean, I used to make the cover. The font is Folks3. Thanks again for your reviews!

Thanks everyone for the amazing reviews! Check out the prologue to my new novel, Lifewish, if you get a chance: Thanks again everyone! Your critique and praise alike are both ...

Thanks Gracie! I really appreciate it! I made those changes... glad I did! :3

LOVE IT! This made me laugh... p.s.- "rioty" = not a word. KEEP WRITING, THIS LOOKS GREAT!

Thank you guys so much! I appreciate it! (so does my poem) :)

Nice job! I'm not an expert on poems, but I did like this one a lot. The rhyming, as someone mentioned in a previous reply, was subtle but had an ...

I agree with Stori--filling in details would make it more real. You'e got the right idea. Keep working at it!

WOOHOO! Hey Gen, I decided to do a follow-up review, upon reflecting and realizing that my previous review was vague, and only covered the first paragraph-and-a-half, pretty much. So here ...

Hey! I thought this was great. Awesome work! One thing that I might suggest is ... NOTHING! Haha, I really had you going there for a second, didn't I? Seriously ...

Haha thank you! :) Have a great Easter!

This is such an amazing poem! This is the best I have read in a while. I can really sympathize for the MC and feel her pain. It made me ...

This is a very lighthearted, humorous story! Love it! And oh-so-true!

OMG!!! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!!! This is an amazing story!!!!!! The only thing that I would change would be the setting. What kind of atmosphere is it???? Other ...