GlasweJane

I love your descriptive use of colour and imagery within your poem and how it triggers the imagination. Not that it needs much stimulation - the sunsets where I am ...

I can recount numerous times where I have felt so confused and lost with my own emotions, and therefore find myself relating greatly to the character within this poem. Memories ...

Hi there! A little review on chapter two now - just as enjoyable as chapter one. A few grammatical and spelling errors, but I see that this has been already ...

Hi there! First of all, I love how you take the opportunity to describe as much as possible within you writing. It helps to create a clear image of your ...

This is my first time coming across this work, and so I am unfamiliar with the previous version. But I have enjoyed what I have read so far and I ...

First thoughts: A heartbreaking start to a hopefully great and rewarding read! Abuse is a tough topic to write about, but I'm glad you decided to tackle it. Fingers crossed ...