Young Writers Society

Hello! It's been a little bit, so I'm kind of rusty at this, but I'll give it a go. Disclaimer: I have not read any of the previous chapters, but ...

Rip it apart. Tear it to shreds. No need to encourage me! *cracks knuckles and pulls out the dragon claws* In 2018, the power went out. All of the electronics ...

FIRST! HA! xP *saves for when she's done reading* Okay, you already know pretty much how I feel about characterization and stuff. So I'm pretty much just going to point ...

First, I'm not reading any of the other reviews posted. So this is coming from an entirely fresh perspective. Second, this review is probably going to be posted in two ...

Zohmigawd Cat Steps! :D *glomps* Nitpicks! ^_^ Footsteps came from down the hall, slowly. Hopefully it was in the right place for a bleed-out. Or able to hinder him. I ...

This was really an amazing stand-alone piece, Skins! I wouldn't be too worried about it not having much context, haha. You give just enough information in the beginning that we ...

Hello Alanna! I'm rather partial to Robin Hood (and Daughter Hood) stories, and your work caught my eye, so I'm stopping by to review. :D First off, I'll start with ...

I will review to say that in my opinion, contrary to the above reviewers, the ending was very interesting! :P I loved the sense of continuity in that last stanza. ...

Hey Truth! This has some major potential, and you have me hooked, so I'm going to offer my two cents and see if I can't help polish this raw rock ...

‘I care about you, but I love ______ more than you. Jesus says that you’re supposed to love your spouse over your children.’ Oh geeze! What kind of mother could ...

Knightley!! I didn't know you did Zelda fanfics! :D Ok, so it's the first one, but whatev. xD Now, to get into it. I'm guessing you've severely changed the course ...

'Ello, Lady! Welcome to YWS. I believe we've met in chat once before? ;) I must say, I love where the descriptions are going in this piece. Not to mention ...

Hey! Glad here. I'm not going to nitpick too much, 'cause it seems everyone else got to that, but I'll point out a few little spots for ya. ;) First ...

Hey, Sun! Cute little oneshot here; very sad. Having said that, I shall go on to the meat of this review. ;D ------ Diary, I can’t stop thinking about him. ...

Alright, just a few quick things I noticed! 1. Spacing The neat thing about this site (and one of the bazillion reasons why everyone here is indebted to the awesome ...