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    Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 12

    Hello! It's been a little bit, so I'm kind of rusty at this, but I'll give it a go. Disclaimer: I have not read any of the previous chapters, but ...

    Jun 25, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: TFoA - Chapter 1 (Part 1 of 3) REVISED

    Rip it apart. Tear it to shreds. No need to encourage me! *cracks knuckles and pulls out the dragon claws* In 2018, the power went out. All of the electronics ...

    Feb 17, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Cat Steps draft (25/6/11)

    FIRST! HA! xP *saves for when she's done reading* Okay, you already know pretty much how I feel about characterization and stuff. So I'm pretty much just going to point ...

    Jun 25, 2011

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: The Sniper

    First, I'm not reading any of the other reviews posted. So this is coming from an entirely fresh perspective. Second, this review is probably going to be posted in two ...

    May 19, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Cat Steps (draft)

    Zohmigawd Cat Steps! :D *glomps* Nitpicks! ^_^ Footsteps came from down the hall, slowly. Hopefully it was in the right place for a bleed-out. Or able to hinder him. I ...

    Apr 30, 2011

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: The Coward's Way Out

    This was really an amazing stand-alone piece, Skins! I wouldn't be too worried about it not having much context, haha. You give just enough information in the beginning that we ...

    Apr 19, 2011

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Legends Of Sherwood

    Hello Alanna! I'm rather partial to Robin Hood (and Daughter Hood) stories, and your work caught my eye, so I'm stopping by to review. :D First off, I'll start with ...

    Jan 2, 2011

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: wristbiter

    I will review to say that in my opinion, contrary to the above reviewers, the ending was very interesting! :P I loved the sense of continuity in that last stanza. ...

    Nov 24, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Golden Wings Chapter 1

    Hey Truth! This has some major potential, and you have me hooked, so I'm going to offer my two cents and see if I can't help polish this raw rock ...

    Sep 4, 2010

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: Scream?*Cry?*Die?

    ‘I care about you, but I love ______ more than you. Jesus says that you’re supposed to love your spouse over your children.’ Oh geeze! What kind of mother could ...

    Jun 24, 2010

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Twilight Princess

    Knightley!! I didn't know you did Zelda fanfics! :D Ok, so it's the first one, but whatev. xD Now, to get into it. I'm guessing you've severely changed the course ...

    Jun 20, 2010

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Dragon.

    'Ello, Lady! Welcome to YWS. I believe we've met in chat once before? ;) I must say, I love where the descriptions are going in this piece. Not to mention ...

    May 20, 2010

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Peanut Butter Banana Sandwiches

    Hey! Glad here. I'm not going to nitpick too much, 'cause it seems everyone else got to that, but I'll point out a few little spots for ya. ;) First ...

    May 2, 2010

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: An Affinity with Love

    Hey, Sun! Cute little oneshot here; very sad. Having said that, I shall go on to the meat of this review. ;D ------ Diary, I can’t stop thinking about him. ...

    Apr 27, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Untitled.

    Alright, just a few quick things I noticed! 1. Spacing The neat thing about this site (and one of the bazillion reasons why everyone here is indebted to the awesome ...

    Apr 18, 2010

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