GingerLizzy

Well, I didn't like the flow of this poem as it was very clunky and it seemed strained in some plaes, but that is my only complaint I believe. The ...

I like this, it has a lot of emotion threaded all the way through and that's good because in some poems the emotion is in the first stanza to capture ...

I agree with the whole capitalisation thing with the I's as it gets annoying when you see people type like this. It makes your work seem more professional when you ...

This is prety nice actually, not something that I could find majorly wrong. The flow and rythmn were okay and the structure was easy to work with. All I can ...

Okay so I'm gonna do a step by step review while I'm reading as then it tends to be a lot easier for you and me. =] I like the ...

I don't now about this poem Gadi.. I just really dont. I wasn't sure about the whole flow of the poem and the way you've displayed the first opening line, ...

I liked the whole flow of this, it worked very well and it made me think that I am extrememly jealous of you; I've been here a while and I ...

I liked this, for a first attempt it was actually pretty good. The concept was actually very original and reminded me of the kind of thing someone would say when ...

Hmm.. I'm not so sure about this poem actually. In some places the rythmn was lacking or it just didn't work but in others it was quite an enjoyable read. ...

Hmm.. I actually kinda liked this; I found it gripping but if you asked me why, I couldn't tell you because I haven't a clue. I wasn't too sure about ...

I didn't really like this poem much because all it is, is questions. Sure, I'm not saying it;s bad to put questions into a poem; I like that in a ...

I like this, it;s got a very playful feel to it. The structure worked well and I liked at the end how the author seemed disgruntled because they had been ...

I wasn't so sure about the structure in this; it made the flow seem clunky like a square wheel, you understand that right? It tended to end one line abruptly ...

Hmm.. I liked this; I thought it was a great concept, but there isn't much emotion entwined in the words of the piece and even though we know that the ...

Gosh. This is very lengthy, but all together okay. One of the small things that annoys me is the length. When I'm faced with a long poem like this, I ...