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Re: Dresses and Politics: Prologue
I enjoyed it immensely! And I completely understand, if you were to read any of my works you'd be able to see that I tend to not edit as much ...
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Re: Stop and Smell the Spider Mums Prologue
Thank you! Your review was incredibly helpful (and although I didn't mean for it to be that way, I do love your connection to Little Red Riding Hood lol). I ...
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Re: side effects may include mood swings
Wow! :) This is a great poem, and even with 4 stanzas or 6-8 lines I didn't feel like it dragged on or like I was waiting for some sort ...
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Re: "Lion"
Yay! I'm so glad that I made you happy. You really are talented, so I'm glad that I was able to boost your confidence and hopefully convince you to KEEP ...
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Re: Impersonation
of course! :)
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Impersonation
sorry I didn't mean to post this!
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Re: Impersonation
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Hi :) To start off, I would just like to say that your opening paragraph was incredibly enticing, and truly captured my attention, so good job with that "Hello, good ... -
Re: Stop and Smell the Spider Mums Prologue
"Her grandparents were immigrants, so whatever they knew about their family was all of the information everyone else got. And they never could be trusted with names and dates it ...
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Re: Stop and Smell the Spider Mums Prologue
Also, for some of the things that you corrected, they were less about being understood literally, and more about being understood culturally, so although you didn't get it, I think ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Stop and Smell the Spider Mums--Chapter 1
thank you!
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Stop and Smell the Spider Mums--Chapter 1
Thank you for the review, and congrats on it being your first one! I already pointed out that I need to edit it, so it by no means ends here, ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Stop and Smell the Spider Mums--Chapter 1
yeah, I plan on adding more to the chapter, so it definitely isn't going to end there. Thanks for the suggestions!
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Stop and Smell the Spider Mums Prologue
Thank you so much for this review, it really helps me to hear from people. I also appreciate you telling me straight instead of dancing around my mistakes. I have ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Stop and Smell the Spider Mums--Chapter 1
I know that I have to edit this, but here is the first draft of it :) enjoy and please leave some reviews
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Aschenputtel Chapter 1
Oh I'm sorry, haha I didn't even notice! I myself typically give up on novels but I really think you've got something special here if it is any consolation from ...
Jul 11, 2017
