GildedLily

Retrodisco666, Yes, the ending is meant to be abrupt-- as if the whole entirety of the poem was more of a solemn burst of revelation to the narrator--and it is ...

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Horseradish, Thank you very much for the advice! I'll take it to heart. :) All good luck to you as well.

Horseradish, Thank you very much for the advice! I'll take it to heart. :) All good luck to you as well.

Kyllorac, Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate it greatly! :D Your tips on line breaks were especially useful. Perhaps it is a coconut. In truth, I was ...

Calligraphy, Actually, many poems (such as this) can be written in paragraph form, especially when they are written like letters. Still, I understand that you mean the format can run ...