Gheala

60-second writing challenge...probably my first-ever love poem... I would tell you if I could - But now a rose just ain’t so sweet. I would tell you this is love, ...

Please, don't ever give up. And please, don't ever say it's your time to go. Fight life's weapons, though it may hurt. Don't lay there looking so inert. Someone or ...

Only reading the title made me sick. Being sexist isn't attractive and you're thinking about those things while you're only 15? You're too young to be sexist anyway. So, women ...

I haven't reviewed in ages! Let's read, read and read! So many questions floating in my head. I’m so confused, but your not (You're not) actually helping me are you? ...

‘There is a place I’ve heard off (of) in the city. Do you want to go there?’ she asked (comma) relieved. ‘Yeah, sure,’ I said wondering how big the mistake ...

We started booking it across the parking lot. “WHAT WAS THAT??!?! WHY!?! JUST WHY?!? WERE YOU TRYING TO GET THIS OUTCOME?!?!” I shouted. “Save your breath. We’ve got to RUN!” ...

First, you used both past and present tense while telling the story. Try to decide which you want to tell the story with. The Foolish Heart Once again I have ...

O.o A lot of people reviewed. :( I'm too late I like this one better. I liked the previous version too, but I haven't known that it was rushed until ...

You know what I absolutely love about your novel... You know, besides having realistic characters and a charming girl like that cute heroine? I love how they haven't fell in ...

The poet, walking slowly under the thin rain, climbed the rocky road that led up the cliff. He was mentally reviewing his life (I don't think 'Mentally reviewing' is literary ...

Hear my words, and run away. Don’t trust the shadows, and never stray. The monster will take you up, and make you his toy, a mindless puppet, and never again ...

Freaks! Intro: "W-what are you? The boy stammered, a shaky hand dropped the knife that used to be held firm for defense. "I saw it." The words were barely heard ...

For starters! Don't be surprised by the red lines here. You don't have that much mistakes, but I do tend to be talkative while reviewing. Lol. The red lines are ...

It was half way down the street when I saw the flashing lights I sped up. In front of my house was a ambulance and a cop car, my mom ...

Let's say I had a feeling I'll be getting a writer's block soon, so I decided to give a review. It usually clears my mind a little. So, let's start! ...