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This made me tear up! I love the last line!

Awesome job! You are so talented! However, certain parts could have used more clear and detailed explanations, or you could have used more complex vocabulary, however I do not know ...

Thank you L1O2L7!!!! I will definitely take that into consideration! Gg127

This is really good! I love the metaphors in the beginning the last sentence. I went through a similar experience at school this year. My boyfriend and I broke up ...

Dear FallenAngel97, I really liked your poem! It was very detailed, and I thought it really captured the essence of time. However, I feel like it was a little bit ...

editing it now!

This was so fun to read! I loved your vocab, rhythm and rhyme. The topic was great, too. However, your stanzas could have been positioned more clearly, or combined or ...

As a whole, I liked it a lot! You elaborated deep into a rarely explored subject...and I liked the space you left for open interpretation....really sparks the imagination. However, the ...

Thank you for your review! i'm working on adding some sorrowful lines to add an element of mystery...perhaps a story that the reader has to imagine. That was very helpful.

Great poem. That was really thought-provoking! I would maybe change the structure around a little, maybe start some lines at different points. Otherwise it was really good !

You have a great start! You were very descripitive of the setting and overall setup. You could embellish it a bit more with more descriptive wording or adjectives, but otherwise ...

Thank you! Im working on the chapter 2 now. It should be up by next week. Still not sure about the plot and where it's gonna go from here, but ...

i really liked it! it was action-packed and gripping. however, the ending was a little abrupt. you might want to edit a few things. great job :)

Its very frightening, but amazing well crafted and worded. really captivating. good job!

This is a great start to a novel. I really liked it. However, it was slow to start, so you might want to have a more intriguing first paragraph.