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This was great! I liked the spacing and the structure, even the topic. However, I think there were a few, excuse me, randomly-placed words in there, such as "death". It ...

Dear Broken Angel, I really liked your poem! Although it was brief, you did a very nice job with the rhythm and rhyming. I loved the concept, however, my one ...

Good start! I like the simplicity of it...short and sweet. I can totally relate to this poem. However, I agree that you could definitely elaborate more on it. Try using ...

That is really good! I am a dancer as well so I can really relate to it. It has a great rhythm, great rhymes, great metaphors, everything. I also loved ...

Wow, that's really meaningful. I loved your use of metaphors and analogies. However, I might add that your use of vocabulary could have been a bit broader. I noticed you ...

That's a beautiful story! I can almost relate to it...personal experience. I think a lot of people have had something like this happen to them. It's bittersweet, in a way. ...

As a whole, I liked it a lot! You elaborated deep into a rarely explored subject...and the space you left for open interpretation. However, the numbers and the length may ...

This is really good! I love the title. Also, it is very thought-provoking. However, the main idea is a little unclear and there is a repetitive use of adjectives such ...

I thought it was really great! However, some of the rhyming was little off. I might suggest rearranging the order or wording so that the rhythm flows better. The concept ...

Great job! i really liked the dialogue in the beginning, it was a really good attention-grabber. However, you could be a bit more descriptive and elaborate a bit more. keep ...

you have a very advanced style of writing! i love it! it seems like it will be a really cute story :) however, i think the plot could be established ...

i really like it! I love fantasy novels because you can imagine anything you want! have fun with it and keep up the good work. the first part i the ...

I really like your writing style! It is well thought out. However, some of the sentences were terse and choppy. I would use a broader range of vocabulary to make ...