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This is really moving! At first, the meaning of this poem is unclear. I was unsure if this was going to be a love poem. However, sometimes a bit of ...

I really like your poem! It is written from a great perspective, and I love the way it is spaced; it adds drama. The only suggestion I have is to ...

I liked your poem! It was about an unusual topic. It was simple in a pleasing way, but it could have used some punctuation and capitalization and the beginning of ...

I liked your poem! It was about an unusual topic. It was simple in a pleasing way, but it could have used some punctuation and capitalization and the beginning of ...

You have such an affinity for words (or non-words?)!!! This technically is not a poem, but I'm reviewing it anyway because it was so much fun to read! Okay, so ...

Wow! In this poem, you have combined two different topics: life and love. Although they are related, it is confusing figuring out the message(s) that you wish the reader to ...

Awesome job! You are so talented! However, certain parts could have used more clear and detailed explanations, or you could have used more complex vocabulary, however I do not know ...

This is a great feel-good, humorous, and relatable poem! I liked the verse that repeats the title of the poem and how you kept repeating it after the other verses. ...

Oh my god I love this poem! I'm serious. It left me breathless. I loved the ending about unkept promises. I can relate to that so much. I know how ...

I loved this poem! I can relate so much to it. I think a lot of people can. The only suggestions I can give are to add some sort of ...

I love topic! All of us readers and writers can relate to it. The line "somewhere between my soul and my fingertips" was excellent and it made me think. Although ...

I love the concept and the topic! However, a few quick suggestions: The first stanza rhymed: touch and much. Then you continued the poem and it did not rhyme, which ...

I love the title! I love the structure! I think you're off to a great start. The part about the ivory throne was a little confusing. Also, during the first ...

I can relate sooo much to this poem! I am going through something just like that right now. I think a lot of other people have experienced something similar to ...

I loved it! The topic was wonderful and it flowed very cleanly. It had an air of mystery about it. I just have a few suggestions that might help you. ...