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Re: Dreams Tell Lies- Chapter Three
heya. I'm here as requested :D Thanks for the review on the start of my story and im glad you liked it ;) Anyways, to the point. I truely did ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: The Art of Love
Heya :D I just wanted to say "wow". This is deep and the reader can capture the emotions that flow through your story. You are an execptional writer and i ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Before They Say Goodnight
OMG!! Ashy-babe this is absolutely awesomely fantastic! Its really powerful and its deeeppp :) You should totally get this recorded or something, you've got the voice for it! I love ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Faith (Chapter 1, Part 1)
Heya Maddy. I really like this story, i think it is cute. At first i thought the old man was going to be a creep, and was meantally shouting "Run ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: A Vampires Kiss
Nawww... :D i really liked your peice, it kept my attention. Only critisism i had was the punctuation but KanenRenoir picked up on that for me. Also try expanding on ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Worship
Heya ;) Just thought i would say that you are a great writer. You did well with describing the scene and what was happening. For some people, writing or reviewing ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: The Monster Within
Oh my god! Maddy that is really good. i didnt even imagine the cops would mistake xavier for your MC!! I was in shock, seriously it was so well written, ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Two Different Worlds *CONTINUATION CHAPTERS 2 & 3* FIXING UP
Heya, I loved it. First off, i didnt expect that at all from the first chapter. It was different but it seemed to fit in, in an unusually cute/strange way. ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Two Different Worlds *CHAPTER 1 AND 2*
Lovely idea. I like it very much. Interaction in dreams would be awesome... would it not? ;) The only thing i have bad is that you seemed rushed, take some ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: A Green Baby named Who? chapter one.
Overall the story was unique. ;) I liked the idea of the rainbow socks for punishment- a big grin spread over my face. The only thing i thought that could ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: AEOTS part1 the beginning ch1
Heya ;) You story was unusual, strangely unique and pretty awesome. I loved it and i totally disagree with the others that have said that they dont really like it. ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: The Burning Light
Heya. I just wanted to say that i read your poem-- and i loved it to pieces :) It had imagery and was very well worded. It explained the loss ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal (Prologue)
Hey Maddy, I told you i would read it. ;) It was really good- the only thing i found wrong with it was the spelling that Jai picked up and ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: The Things I Thought Before I Died: Part Four
...Wow, just wow. I didnt realise how much a story can affect a person. I guess you got what you were after- im sad for your character. You are a ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: The Things I Thought Before I Died: Part Two
:D I dont know what to say. It is somehow making me sad but yet im am absolutly intreged. You are brilliant, yes i say it once again.. but it ...
Sep 19, 2010
