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Re: Being a Teenager
Hmmmm I would make these lines shorter...... Then I will review it. Plus, some of the best poems don't rhyme. A. S. Thanks! :mrgreen:
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 3 (Draft #1)
:smt003 THANKS FOR THE REVIEWS!! :D
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #1)
Thanks for your review!! I'm glad you liked the story! :smt003 *happy* Oh, and in case you don't know yet. The I just posted Chapter II!
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: Roses Are Red
THIS IS SOOO TRUTH!! :smt003 I loved it
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 3
You... you described so well what he was feeling on stage... that I felt it and I imagine it :smt002 !! You rock at writing!
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: A Nostalgic Man
You're a great writer! I love this, it's amazing. I just found one error... you wrote wandering instead of wondering!! But that's all!! KeEp It oN!!
Jun 9, 2010