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Re: Better To Have Loved And Lost?
Hi, Lighty. I really liked this... It was really nice and it was really true too. The way you describe is enviable... in a way that I could imagine myself ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Demon Within... Chapter 1 Pt. 2
Hi, Keitaro! Sorry I'm laaaaate. I was suppose to review your story a few days ago, but I leave the tabs open to review it later and then my mom, ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: The Demon Within... Chapter 1 Pt. 1
Hi, Keitaron. I like this story, it is really intresting & I will love to read the next chapter. :D I found some constant errors in the story, like... you ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: My Falling Sun Ch. 1 (remade)
Hellow L.P.! I'm here like I said! :D “Tristan is getting the last thing,” Kevin informed his dad before wrapping his arms around me. :( Now that I know the ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Atlantic Prep
Hi, Jenn. I'm here, like I said I would. :D I like your story, it seems like it's going to be good. I also started to like the character, she ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: The Dream Snatcher
Hi, Skittle! This is sooo beautiful... one of the cutest thing I've read in my whole entire life. You describe everything soo... well and clearly. Being totally honest... I loved ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Where do I Find a Green Rose? Chapter I pt. 2
Hi, Jemoooo! :D I'm here to review your chapter. This chapter was good, it was nice and entertaining. About the grammar, the only thing I found was the comma thing ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Amber
Hi, Adeera! I'm here! This is a really beautiful poem... It makes me remember my big sister. But only one thing, I think every sentence should start with capital letters, ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Rozion: The Warrior Within
Hi, Zane! I'm here, like I told you! Oh, I see... Draft #2 is so much better than the first one. It has more descriptions, you described your characters and ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
Hi! :wink: I really enjoyed the piece. I like your writing style... well I like it . About the title I would've say it "The Dance That Changed My Life" ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Friends, Lovers or Nothing EDITED VERSION
So, here to leave a comment! I'm Sol and I enjoyed this is was very cute. "Holy crap!" I exclaimed. It was brilliantly coloured, blue, gold, red and purple and ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Forever Summer
This was a good story! I actually enjoyed it! It was when I began. Began to listen, to see, to feel. To love. Music, clothes, people, whatever took my fancy. ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Trust~Chapter 1
Hi, Jolene! Here to review! I Fished one or two mistakes and I wanna show them to you! :D While she drank her cup of coffee, her moble phone rang. ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Dragon.
Hi, Ladypurple! I just had the honor to read one of yor stories. It was funny! "Fine. If there is a dragon you have to come back with one of ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: I'd Cry (An "I'd Lie" by Taylor Swift Parody) *contest entry
Hi, ultraviolet! You will not believe me! But when I saw the title I though "NOOOO! Why people make parodies to Taylor Swift??" But now that I read it I ...
Jul 25, 2010
