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Hi there cityofdragons. Geez! This is so shocking. I can tell your character really loved the dead person. And the end just left me speechless. Your writing is good, no ...

Hi there ilovebooks It's amazing how you said so much in a few words. How you made me think. How your writing captivated and amazed me. How you wrote so ...

Hi Bamaisme... Hm... seriously, I love how you act as if the reader were a close friend. xD But you certainly have to check out your grammar. 1. Sentences should ...

Hi gokubrother. Boy, the way you talk about poetry amazes me. It's like there are still passionated reader/writer. :) I'm glad. Okay, first I've gotta say that you are indeed ...

Hi there, SkyeDreamer. First, don't apologize for writing a long poem. Words are what writers like after all, don't you think? ;) So while reading it, I was thinking that ...

Hi there, brittinstenten. I love the subject you're bringing us, since I am a big fan of Lennon's song and I do not support war. I liked your first paragraph, ...

Hi Night! Solly here, to review your piece. ^_^ This is quite nice. I enjoyed it. Even though it's a sad poem, you made it sound sweet and I loooooove ...

Hi there Artsy. :) Wow. Honestly, I love it. This is the best hate poem I've read. O.O You expressed so well what you feel, the emotion in it is ...

Hi JCK. O.O You have no idea how much I enjoyed this poem. It made me think. It flew awesomely. It wasn't long. The stanzas were just perfect. Every sentence, ...

Hi Sindhu. :) Solly here to review. Your poem made me happy. It's something so simple, but true. Something that takes me back to childhood. The way a kid sees ...

Hi there, Mary Jane. I'm Solly, I'm going to be reviewing your poem today. :) Well,I like your poem. A lot. It flows pretty well, the topic your bringing us ...

Hi AJ. :) I love it! It flows. The emotions where well written, I just love it! xD ^_^

Hi, JCK! Solly here, as requested. :) First off, the cover is just amazing. :o If I were a bard, I’d sing you a song. If I were a friend, ...

Hi Iamnotperfect. :) I love the concept of the poem. Very beautiful. I liked it. Though I think there are a couple of punctuation problems. And this is how I'd ...

Hi there, LostMoments. ^_^ Your first stanza is pretty good. You showed us what the situation is pretty well. We can see what's coming and that's good. Though, the 2nd ...