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Re: Is God Real?
Hi there Zwinky! I'm Solly, I'm here to review for you. You've done a great job, actually. This poem flows greatly and it rhymes and each line makes sense. I ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: I Want To Tell You
Hi there Captain! Giving you here a good advice, just say it. Just think about other situations in life that are way harder than telling someone you loff them. XD ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: The Edge of the Earth
Oh, my God! Hi there, Gg! And welcome to YWS! (: Dear Lord, you're such an amazing writer! :O I love this! I love how you started talking about the ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Emotional Spectrum
Hi There Story Weaver. Your poem is quiet nice, even though it's short, I enjoyed it. I loved how every line rhymes with the next one. Though, it kind of ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Supreme Team, Friend or Foe Chapter One
Hi Steve! I have arrived! :twisted: To make you an evull review. Lol. Well, this chapter, I like it. I think you wrote a great description, and made it entertaining. ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Although your gone, you still haunt me....
Hi there, Stacey. First off, welcome to YWS! Feel free to ask me anything if you need help. ^_^ This topic your bringing us is one disgusting topic.. but no, ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: A Hare's Tale
Haii MrTaza!
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The Crimson Ribbon [1]
Hi there, Shubz
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: The Atlantian Children – The Light of Zakious - deleted
Hi there RobsterJames. I'm here to review, as requested. Wow. I like this. I'm not very fond of scripts, and I don't really like to read historical stories when it ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Kaleidoscope Introduction
Hola, Teresa. I'm here to review as requested. ^_^ Teniendo en mente que ya han revisado tus escritos en Inglés, me enfocaré en lo que escribiste en español. La manera ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Raining in Paradise
Hola, goku! ^_^ Me encanta! Y el final es perfecto. Tienes mucho vocabulario y eso es bueno. Me lo disfruté, sin dudar. Pero te faltan los acentos, no hablo mucho ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Burning Thoughts
Hi alannakay. I just got to say it. You are an amazing poet. It's like you took a punch of words and made mend them to make them sound perfectly ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Regurgitation of My Paradoxes
Hi there amygabb. Bahaha... Okay, this poem is not supossed to be funny, I know. But I love that you added sarcasm to it, since almost every teenager speak that ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Arrival of monsoon
Hi ERZA. Your poem is beautiful. I love that it's narrative, and how it starts with something simple as, "Once upon a time". Even though some people may not like ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: The Point of Life
Hi there sharitm2 Hahah. I've gotta say that your poem isn't completly pessimistic, you managed to look on the brightside in almost every stanza. I love the way it flows, ...
Oct 31, 2011