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thanks for your comments btw why does everyone think my character is called Carrie? I've read through the story and I don't see why everyone thinks that

well, it was ok but i don't really understand it i mean, why is she so scared? and the story didn't really go anywhere, it was described a night out

thats creepy! how did the attacker get inside the house? how did he whisper to arnold without being seen? I'm hoping that everything will be explained soon! this is really ...

well I'm glad that you continued it but this one was a bit boring not much really happened apart from that fatc that someone else might die in 11 days ...

this is good! its interesting and mysterious who is the killer? why is he killing people? are the victims connected in any way? why is it eleven days? why not ...

short but sweet! lol rythm was a bit funny in some places but I'm rubbish at poetry so I can't talk! funny little poem!

this was good, and i like the way you've included the bit about how the child doesn't know that its his grave stone, its just a rock with his name ...

this is much better than the first part! This adds more tension and I can just imagine the characters flirting with each other! I love this, its great!

ooh! lots of peeps like your story (i told you it was good but you didn't think so!) write more, the crowd wants more!!!! mwa xx

Wasn't entirely sure what this was about. Didn't make a lot of sense to me, sorry!