Gardevite

Sounds like my town xD

Did it make you smile?

Maybe it just me then :3

Oopsies this is a review admin people. ;)

Omg! This is just amazing! Well done Joshie . X3 "You must be an angel without wings. I'm glad you've fallen, you have fallen right into my arms." Favorite line! ...

I literally love everything about this. Thank you for posting it!

Sorry xD *not to comment on capitalization

Thank you for your review! I appreciate it! Some small tips for reviewing poetry is to not comment on punctuation. I didn't just accidentally hit the shift key and decide ...

Thank you for the review! I thank you for the advice, I knew this was a bit choppy so thank you!

More will be added if I ever edit it! And I will stay beautiful. I will.

Well the age isn't the point. It's the fact that her mother sheltered her from the world around her.

Thanks for the review! To answer your question, no she was not seductive. She was taken advantage of and blamed because of his status in the society.

Thank you for the review! I honestly couldn't remember how to spell 'crowd' xD Thank you for your nice words! I don't plan on writing more of this, but it ...

Thank you so much for the review! :) I'll check that link out! (quotation and punctuation always confuse me)

Thank you so much for the review! :) I'll check that link out! (quotation and punctuation always confuse me)