Gardevite

Ohh sorry, forgot to ask. Would you like be updated on this story? Like when a new chapter comes out, would you like to be tagged?

Ohh sorry, forgot to ask. Would you like be updated on this story? Like when a new chapter comes out, would you like to be tagged?

Thank you Deanie! I promise everything will be explained soon!! I'm just going to clarify some things! Alice is the one with control over the trees (well, nature, kinda. That'll ...

This is sooooo good. I love it! Please keep going with this!

Thank you! ^_^ what a nice review!

Deanie you're literally a saint!! This was sooo helpful! But I feel kinda bad 'cos the rest of the novel isn't going to be this cutesy. XD

Thank you. ^~^

So interesting. I'm wondering if all the details of the future (post dead-sir) will be told through flash backs (err flash-forwards), or will we eventually catch up, leaving us with ...

My only tip would be to cite everything. You have a lot of statistics in here, so you should really cite the source. (The exact link/book)

If there's anything you need to be reviewed, send it my way. ;) (but I won't be able to get to it until tomorrow.)! :)

Thank you so much! Your criticism is very appreciated! :)

Thank you so much! Your criticism is very appreciated! :)

I'm on mobile too! :) I don't own a laptop. That quote thing was just a tip! :)

Would you mind pointing out where the line brakes are awkward? Also anther isn't a typo, it's a part of a plant- as is the stigma. ;) When you're quoting, ...

Thank you! Anther isn't a typo, it's a part of a plant. ;) also, try this code: [quote] what you're quoting [/quote] So it'll look like this! :)