Gardevite

I know that feel bro. *hugs*'

Wow was not expecting that anyway :L

Cool, i'll go read it :D

Thank you very much for your input. I really appreciate constructive criticism :) I'm actually going to remember your metaphor of currency and money, it's very useful :) I'd like ...

Good lord I need a dictionary. I really liked it :)

Thank you so much. That comment made my day :)

Hi, thanks for the positive review :) Just want to clarify for you that the kind man is a metaphor for an angelic or heavily being. The protagonist also gets ...

Thank you so much for the positive review. Just wanted to say that it is choppy, this is just a draft, and I wanted to split the lines to slow ...

Thank you for your honest opinion. To clarify, the cloth in the trees is the plastic bag, he confused it for a woman's dress, and the 'sultry wind' is to ...

Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. :P

Thank you for your review. :) I appreciate te constructive criticism. :)

Hi, sorry i tried to separate it but it didn't work for me :(