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Thanks for the review Avi! Thanks for the ideas too! You've given me a lot to think about :D

I loved what you changed the part about the moon to! Beautiful!

Glad to help. I honestly thought I came off a bit harsh. I would like to again say that I really liked this poem :D

Thank you for your lovely review! Made my morning! It's in the short story section for now because I plan on editing it before making it the official prologue. Thank ...

You're too sweet darling :D

Thanks Blackwood. Yeah my idea is to rewrite this and use it as a prologue. Your review is extremely appreciated!

Ohh my. XD This is hilarious!

Not a problem! :) Glad to be of service!

Completely understand! Have a nice day! :)

Thank you! Yeah I have a habit of info-dumping in short stories. XD

Thank you! Yeah I have a habit of info-dumping in short stories. XD

Ohh thank you very much! :)

Ohh thank you very much! :)

I'll see if I can get around to them.

Aww thank you!