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Galerius

  • Poetry » General, Supernatural Re: Aunt Thora

    Hi Morrigan, At the risk of awarding too much credit, I felt like you had something that was starting to test its neonatal wings - at least in the beginning ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Earth Is Yours

    Hi Noelle, This is an unintelligent and insulting poem, which is actually rather impressive because most fall into only one of the two categories. Unintelligent because you don't even attempt ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Thoughts slip between the trees

    Hi Deanie, They have a word for poetry like this, and that word is tryhard. Woeful and inadequate are two more appropriate terms, but let's focus on tryhard right now. ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Youth

    omg wow I like how when you talked about holding hands w/ the moon, it remineded me of when connor from 3rd period home economics class (cute blond guy *sigh* ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Hindsight Is A Beautiful Thing

    Hi ThePretentiousEnema, Rarely does a username dictate the content of the poem but I think you've nailed it, so to speak. This is a wash of ridiculous contortion that serves ...

    Dec 28, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: with words she knows but does not understand

    Before I'm gone, I will give this a review. You have my word.

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Supernova

    This shouldn't be forgotten.

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows

    retelling of my poem above - by Persephoneia There is nakedness in death and dying. This is what I told her the day I showed her to play. Shoulder to ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows

    Battlesphere - by Lil_Pau It is said "When Sol awakens and gets out of bed, he'll torch his head and hair in a tangled mess of flame and scars, he ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows

    The Stranger is Watching - by PadrePio The guide to following yourself! A shadow entrenched is just the dark and learns to fly and play his part; gone one moment, ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows

    (If only you were) Mine - by popatemyheart1994 A hermit lives on the bottom of the cliff. Sometimes he sends me gifts of regolith and quartz, finished with polish and ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows

    Hush - by Jennafina Saturday and the night before we predict our death, store tablets for aches safely in bathroom walls where no one will erase them, stench of breaths ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows

    that soft classic music - by Yuriiko and MilknCookies A drop clutches onto the windshield, drained, skinny blotch on the pane like a bug's memory fading fast. Handel's on 94.4, ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Death of Old Man Messier

    Mar 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...

    i liked it from the beginning very very goood!!! review mine please? thank you xx

    Nov 18, 2010


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind