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Re: Aunt Thora
Hi Morrigan, At the risk of awarding too much credit, I felt like you had something that was starting to test its neonatal wings - at least in the beginning ...
May 6, 2015 -
Re: The Earth Is Yours
Hi Noelle, This is an unintelligent and insulting poem, which is actually rather impressive because most fall into only one of the two categories. Unintelligent because you don't even attempt ...
May 6, 2015 -
Re: Thoughts slip between the trees
Hi Deanie, They have a word for poetry like this, and that word is tryhard. Woeful and inadequate are two more appropriate terms, but let's focus on tryhard right now. ...
May 6, 2015 -
Re: Youth
omg wow I like how when you talked about holding hands w/ the moon, it remineded me of when connor from 3rd period home economics class (cute blond guy *sigh* ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Hindsight Is A Beautiful Thing
Hi ThePretentiousEnema, Rarely does a username dictate the content of the poem but I think you've nailed it, so to speak. This is a wash of ridiculous contortion that serves ...
Dec 28, 2012 -
Re: with words she knows but does not understand
Before I'm gone, I will give this a review. You have my word.
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Supernova
This shouldn't be forgotten.
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows
retelling of my poem above - by Persephoneia There is nakedness in death and dying. This is what I told her the day I showed her to play. Shoulder to ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows
Battlesphere - by Lil_Pau It is said "When Sol awakens and gets out of bed, he'll torch his head and hair in a tangled mess of flame and scars, he ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows
The Stranger is Watching - by PadrePio The guide to following yourself! A shadow entrenched is just the dark and learns to fly and play his part; gone one moment, ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows
(If only you were) Mine - by popatemyheart1994 A hermit lives on the bottom of the cliff. Sometimes he sends me gifts of regolith and quartz, finished with polish and ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows
Hush - by Jennafina Saturday and the night before we predict our death, store tablets for aches safely in bathroom walls where no one will erase them, stench of breaths ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Galerius' lil boat of rainbows
that soft classic music - by Yuriiko and MilknCookies A drop clutches onto the windshield, drained, skinny blotch on the pane like a bug's memory fading fast. Handel's on 94.4, ...
Apr 7, 2011 - Re: The Death of Old Man Messier Mar 25, 2011
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i liked it from the beginning very very goood!!! review mine please? thank you xx
Nov 18, 2010
