Gadi.

This is more of a poem than real, hard song lyrics. As a poem, it's wonderfully creative, terriffyingly true and sobering. As a lyric--meh.

The thing with this lyrics is as others mentioned above: it's pointlessly stupid. Including the spaces, and the idea, and the telling not showing. However, your rhyming was truly hilarious.

Wow. That was amazing. I can only sit here and be completely stunned. My favorite line was the "father of the string quartet" one. It was amazing. One of the ...

YAY! I am gadi.

You are incredibly pumped. But if you show your brattiness to the world in such stimulating poetry, then your sins may be forgiven. I applaude you.

I am really sorry, but I used tabs on Word and it had this entire swirly, imaginative structure and I can't figure out how to fix it on YWS! HELP!

Okay, so I re-read it, and I found a few silly problemas that are pixel-sized: "wracked" This doesn't fit here. "wracked" is more of an informal, sort of "messy"--and it ...

Thanks everyone! Good luck! I know we'll see more of your stuff around You bet! I don't know whether I've read anything by you before I haven't of yours either! ...

I love that book! But there's already a topic about it somewhere around here.

Okay, Ghostwriter. If you want people to like your work, you must use good grammar--otherwise they would be turned off the moment they see your work. If I come up ...

TThank you everyone! For all you New Yorkers out there, hope I did justice to your wondeful city.

Well, my darlings, I have to say I deliciously agree with each and every one of you, particularly those who agreed with me. I like MischiefMaker the most, though, as ...

This was pretty good....I must say. this does give me inspiration, too. Shows how much one can draw life from simple objects... Like a Psychological Thrilllllllllller.

Thanks for the PM! So here are the tricks: Be open. Write your poem, let it flow--then wait a minute, get a glass of water, forget all about that poem. ...

EXTRA! EXTRA! Revision for Azila's POV contest. So do you like it??