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Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 34
This is a very well throughout out that has been write very well. I really enjoyed it right from the beginning and could not stop reading it. Just one suggestion ...
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Re: Her time of the month
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Jun 20, 2014
This is a very well written story which I like. I am grabbed right from the start and do not want to have to put it down that is how ... -
Re: Mistake
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Jun 20, 2014
This is a very well written story which I like. I am grabbed right from the start and do not want to have to put it down that is how ... -
Re: Sonnet: What is there to Say?
I liked this poem. This is very well written and I thought that you had a good grasp on the poem writing. You should be careful with your punctuation, spelling ...
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Re: Biological Warfare
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Jun 20, 2014
This is a very well written story which I like. I am grabbed right from the start and do not want to have to put it down that is how ... -
Re: Vessel
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Jun 20, 2014
This is a very well written story which I like. I am grabbed right from the start and do not want to have to put it down that is how ... -
Re: Suppressed Grief
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Jun 20, 2014
This is a very well written story which I like. I am grabbed right from the start and do not want to have to put it down that is how ... -
Re: Fight scene
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Jun 20, 2014
This is a very well written story which I like. I am grabbed right from the start and do not want to have to put it down that is how ... -
Re: Flirtatious Glances, Secret Desires (Excerpt)
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Jun 20, 2014
This is a very well written story which I like. I am grabbed right from the start and do not want to have to put it down that is how ... -
Re: Grafitti
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Jun 20, 2014
This is a very well written story which I like. I am grabbed right from the start and do not want to have to put it down that is how ... -
Re: Time
This is a very well written poem. Good job on the topic selection. I was able to gather a lot of imagery from your poem. Just be careful with punctuation ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: Dishes: Part 1
Your writing is very good. I really liked it and could get into it from the beginning. This story is very well written and i can't many errors for you ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Anxiety
This is a very nice poem. If you delve into this poem deeper a bit more then is a very nice underlying message that I can see which can come ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Sleep
This is very well written but as I can see it isn't finished. You should expand on it so that the reader can dive into it more. Just be careful ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Love Is
this is nice poem showing us the different types of love. just be careful with you sentence structure and word choice as sometimes it slows own the flow of this ...
Apr 27, 2014