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This is great, at least, it has the potential to be. You have excellent thought pattern and the rhyming is okay too, as you were able maintain it. However, your ...

You have a very wonderful idea. Your expression is also very commendable. your punctuation is a little faulty and makes your poem unnecessarily confusing. With gentle fingers, and staining ink, ...

This is wonderful. Very Unique. But above the hilarious pattern and wonderful concept of your poem, its seems quite confusing. Like already mentioned, the first stanza seems to follow a ...

I like your poem a lot and I think you should continue writing poems. Choosing a favorite part in your poem is not easy because every part is good I ...

I really like this poem. The beginning portion of the poem is a bit rough but the rest is excellent. I also agree with the guy that said that the ...

This is wonderful yet I have to say that It is not a lyric poem. It is more of a narrative poem I liked the fact that you tried something ...

Nice story,you have a great imaginative sense,develop it well and soon you will be on top. Well done.I think you were a little wacky sometimes and you went off the ...

I have not really covered your wonderful story to my satisfaction to criticise it but this is all the same a wonderful story. Nice introduction(prologue) that makes one really love ...

I have to commend the wonderful thoughtfulness in the essay. Very factual article and really enlightening about money. You also did very nice to have mentioned the positives do well ...