FutureFamousWriter

this is not the first chapter but i'm glad you like it, i'll send you the first chapter FutureFamousWriter :)

Im sorry, but have you read the prologue or first chapter? its seems that you havn't and i will send you the prologue and first chapter to you. Thanks for ...

Perfect grammar, perfect tension, perfect imagery! there's one thing i need to bring up that i'm not sure of; is it awaken or awakened? Great Work!

mate,mate,mate. hold on for the rest of the chapters! ive already written 10 and it tells about her kidnapping as it goes along. plus, its not a crime story! (: ...

Sorry, i meant that i was mad about it

About the AIDS thing, i just added that in because i got teased about having AIDS when i never so much as kissed a guy before. I added that in ...

thanks

Thank you! I agree about the party scene. I think i should redo it. Any tips? I see you are from Australia, me too! I live in Adelaide, where about ...

totally true! books are a escape from troubles in life. the bad thing is that sometimes i don't know what is reality or fiction. have fun with more writing P.S ...