FutureAstronaut

Great story! The plot makes sense and the characters are down-to-earth. I didn't see very many mistakes if any. Some sentances are confusing, like: The sun is still pouring over ...

I really enjoyed the story, though the part where the main character went cannibal was kind of creepy. There was a lot of errors in the story, like capitalization was ...

This story is very well written, with little to no mistakes that i saw. The plot line plays out very well and the descriptions are spectacular. The way the setting ...

I think your poem is heart warming. I didn't see any mistakes which shows how much time you put in this poem (along with the poem itself of course). I ...

I thought the story was cute and had a plot line, BUT: 1: Capitalization. It was overlooked in a lot of places, such as at the beginning of sentences. You ...

This story was exactly what a scary book should be, scary. I was confused on what happened when he smashed his nose. I think that he fell through a window ...

This story is very well written, although some punctuation errors can be found. When ending a quote that doesn't end in an exclamation point or question mark, a comma needs ...